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[Name] loved to sing, so much that every night, she’d go up to her favorite bar to sing karaoke. She has quite a few fans too. But there was one man in particular that would always watch her. He stood as close to the stage as he could. He had nicely tanned skin, brown hair, and these bright green eyes. Oh how [Name] loved those eyes. Yes, she had noticed the Spanish man watching her intensely. Sounds creepy? Not at all, since this man was a close friend of [Name]’s. Antonio represented the country Spain.
He and [Name] have been close friends, ever since they first met back when they were notorious pirates.

Today, Antonio was with his friends, Francis (who represented France) and Gilbert (who represented Prussia). He brought them along since they didn’t believe that [Name], who was famous for being very shy, had such a talent.

“Just you wait, her singing is so amazing that it’ll leave you speechless!” he had told them earlier.

“You’re such a liar Antonio! [Name]’s so quiet, people notice Canada more than her!” Gilbert cackled.

“Sorry mon ami, but I have to agree with Prussia here. She’s such a shy one.” Francis said.

At the sound of the Bad Touch Trio arguing, a young Romano woke up from his nap and peeked down from the top of the stairs. He wanted to know what they were talking about so loudly that they disturbed his slumber.

“Fine, don’t believe me! You’ll regret it when you hear her singing!” Antonio vowed to his friends.

Prussia scoffed, but agreed to go see [Name] later that night. Francis wanted to believe his friend, but it seemed too strange to be true. So he also agreed to go along.

“I coming too!” Romano shouted from the top of the stairs. [Name]? Singing? This he had to see.

“No you’re not Lovi; you’re staying right here tonight.” Antonio shouted back up.

“Why the hell not you tomato bastard?!” Romano came stomping down the stairs.

“Because I don’t want anything happening to you, that’s why. You can do anything you want if you stay here….”

“…. Anything?” The little Southern Italian liked the sound of this.

Antonio sighed. He knew he’d regret this. Knowing Romano, he’d make a huge mess in his house. A mess that he’d have to clean up while Romano slept.

“Yes, anything. Will you stay here?”

“Fine….” He finally agreed.

“Alright, with that, we’re off!” Antonio said excitedly to Gilbert and Francis.

-Back to the present-

[Name] was nervous. She saw that her Spanish friend had brought the rest of the Bad Touch Trio with him. She had planned to sing a special song to Antonio. She’s had a huge crush on him. Unfortunately, she was too shy to say anything about it. She was jealous every time she had seen him flirting with other women. Maybe she can confess her feelings through a song… But now that Prussia and France were here, she was afraid of embarrassing herself in front of them.

[Name] tried to shake off those feelings as she walked up the stage. The crowd went wild as soon as she set foot on the stage. [Name] grinned at her fans. She felt like a celebrity up there. She waited for the group to quiet down as she sat down on the stool set up for her. Once they were silent, waiting to hear her singing, she spoke into the microphone.

“Hey everybody. Tonight, I have a song I’d like to sing for somebody out in the crowd. It’s not a request, but I wanted to confess my feelings for a long time but I’ve been too shy to say anything. So through this song, I hope he understands how I feel for him.” [Name] said to her fans, occasionally glancing at Antonio.

Gilbert noticed who [Name] was referring to right away and elbowed Antonio.

“Hey! What was that for?!” He glared at Gilbert.

“You mean you…. Oh never mind, just pay attention.” Gilbert shook his head in disappointment. Sometimes his friend could be so oblivious to what’s being said.

[Name] gave a nod to the DJ, who started up the song. Most recognized the song right away and cheered loudly, then quieted down as [Name] was about to start.

You're on the phone
with your girlfriend ‒ she's upset
She's going off
about something that you said
'cause she doesn't get your humor like I do.
I'm in my room ‒ it's a typical Tuesday night.
I'm listening to the kind of music she doesn't like.
She'll never know your story like I do.

But she wears short skirts
I wear t-shirts
She's cheer captain
And I'm on the bleachers
Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find
That what you're looking for has been here the whole time.
If you could see
That I'm the one
Who understands you
Been here all along
So why can't you see
you belong with me,
You belong with me?
Walking the streets
With you and your worn out jeans
I can't help thinking
This is how it ought to be.
Laughing on a park bench
Thinking to myself
"Hey, isn't this easy?"
And you've got a smile
That could light up this whole town.
I haven't seen it in awhile
Since she brought you down.
You say you're fine -
I know you better than that.
Hey, what you doing
With a girl like that?
She wears high heels,
I wear sneakers.
She's cheer captain,
And I'm on the bleachers.
Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find
that what you're looking for has been here the whole time.
If you could see
That I'm the one
Who understands you
Been here all along
So why can't you see
you belong with me?
Standing by you
Waiting at your backdoor.
All this time
How could you not know, baby
You belong with me,
You belong with me?
Oh, I remember you were driving to my house
In the middle of the night.
I'm the one who makes you laugh
When you know you're about to cry.
I know your favorite songs,
And you tell me about your dreams.
Think I know where you belong,
Think I know it's with me.

Can't you see
That I'm the one
Who understands you?
Been here all along
So why can't you see
You belong with me?
Standing by you
Waiting at your backdoor.
All this time
How could you not know, baby,
You belong with me,
You belong with me?
You belong with me.
Have you ever thought just maybe
You belong with me?
You belong with me.

The fans all cheered loudly as soon as [Name] finished. Antonio’s prediction was right; both Gilbert and Francis were left speechless. But he was nowhere near them. [Name]’s heart fell when she saw that Antonio was missing. She’d seen that Gilbert tried to tell him what her intention was and hoped he’d gotten through. She sighed sadly and stood up to get off the stage when the crowd started cheering again. It startled [Name] and confused her. Gilbert and Francis were making motions, trying to tell her to turn around.

As she did, [Name] understood why. Antonio had snuck up to the stage (or at least tried to) and stood right behind her, grinning.

“Antonio? What are you-” [Name] started, but something interrupted her. Antonio wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her in close enough for a kiss.

The crowd enjoyed this as they whistled, whooped, and cheered.

“It’s about damn time!!” Gilbert shouted from his seat. Francis laughed.

As they pulled away, Antonio looked down at [Name], still smiling as he whispered the words she always wanted to hear.

“Te quiero mucho.”
Cause my original title was too long, I had to use that title. Bleh. Doesn't matter. ANYWHO. This story sucks. I know. It brings shame to me as a Spain fangirl. Also, this is my contest entry for :iconlennonthellama97:'s contest~ Even though it sucks. o -o ENJOY.

I do not own Hetalia or its characters.
I do not own Taylor Swift's song, You Belong With Me.
This guy owns you. :iconsexyspainplz:
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AnimeLover2467 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
I actually do sing publicly, so it's nice to find a fanfiction that I can relate to!! Wonderful job, my friend!!
NatureTune Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student General Artist
I wish i could have a curage to sing in front of people. I know i have a voice; i was in choirs. I've never been able to calmly sing solo.
Now i`m not singing even to myself if I
suspect that someone may hear. :worry:

Curse you-shyness :threaten:
Nals-luff Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. 8D
epicbleachfan998 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Pffft. xD I like that wow--
Nals-luff Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
xD You deserve it!
epicbleachfan998 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Aww~ Too kind dear. ;w;
oO0RyuuHeartsYou0Oo Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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epicbleachfan998 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
WHOA!! xD BEST COMMENT EVER! :iconlawooplz:
NEIKUUKWOW Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013
If your trying to say I love you so much, change tanto to mucho! :) this gives me the fuzzles
epicbleachfan998 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Ah, thank you! I'll fix it in a moment! Sorry about that! ^^; It did? o.o That's good right?
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